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    dots Submission Name: Dedicated To My First True Lovedots
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    Author: kstina
    ASL Info:    23/female/Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 0/2/15
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 460
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       I'll Alwayss Love You Alex <3


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    dotsDedicated To My First True Lovedots
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    life so unpredictable u just never know

    whats gonna happen next so im learning to let go

    life gave us battles and we stuck together

    we made plans, had dreams of forever

    you were my everything my dream come true

    i keep thinking of everything we went through

    seems that last fight over the secret i held from you

    helped tear apart us two

    after that you still said you werent going anywhere, but even then i felt you pulling away

    i tried to hold on i needed you to stay

    but you found a simple little problem and you gave me a choice

    i made the decision that i needed to make and that was the end of us

    i sit here thinking and still i cry

    my love for you still here in my heart wondering asking why :(

    you stood by me throught it all

    i never thought we could be torn apart by something so small

    maybe the little thing yousaid we couldnt fix was an excuse to escapemy problems,but i dont blame you

    if i could escape them that easily i would too

    we faced too much, we werent ready, unprepared

    im blessed my life was spared

    to this day im still confused

    i feel as if i never knew you




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