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    dots Submission Name: "A Christmas Wish"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
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    dots"A Christmas Wish"dots
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    A wish from our house
    to your house
    this special
    time
    of year

    May your home
    be blessed with
    happiness
    and lots
    of
    Christmas Cheer

    May your
    stockings
    all be full
    of gifts
    and may
    your hearts
    be full
    of love

    And may
    you and yours
    be safe
    and warm
    with
    God's
    blessing
    from above.




    Submitted on 2011-12-24 11:27:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A very heart felt and immaculate wishes. Love is the most cherished thing in life.

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    | Posted on 2012-01-28 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely!! What a wonderful reminder of the real reason for the season...the divine gift of love!

    To my own mind, Christmas has been overhyped since antiquity.
    It's believed that early Christians created a holiday for their new religion that would incorporate pagan observances in order to swell the ranks of the faithful, and the date is not significant to the true faith.
    I agree with this analysis. Nowhere in the gospels does Jesus ask the faithful to loose their flippin minds over the date of his birth.
    After all, it was not the beginning of Jesus' life that was important, but the humble and selfless end.

    Phooey to the manic whoopla over presents and decorations and all the trappings of this holiday! Leave the world behind and rejoice in peace and love with those who are dear to you!!


    | Posted on 2011-12-24 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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