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    dots Submission Name: Your Name Written is Calligraphydots
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    Author: all2rest
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 30/40/34
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       No face for this poem, maybe it's a future love I'm hoping for


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    dotsYour Name Written is Calligraphydots
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    Your name written is calligraphy
    Beautiful art extended from the hand at ease
    So fluid and soft, it flows magically.

    Gentle and seductive
    Rich in tone through it's construction
    Living history practiced with excellency.

    Hard lines move left to right without effort
    Curving and bending with a delicate temper
    Boldly, with grace, it glides over paper.

    Your name written is a fine art indeed
    My heart is the paper
    Your love is the ink

    Inscribed is the lettering that spells it out true
    Forever reminding of what belongs to you




    Submitted on 2011-12-28 03:27:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yes, not much to say here, other than..

    i really like this...love sneaks up on us, way before we know a name...it's a face, a feeling, a flirtation---a sense...someone is occupying our space, the space that is our mind and heart, sometimes long before we realize...

    and then name is written is fine art...we are already creating a painting of love.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-12-28 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm well this is romanticism now isn't it. I think it actually works to point out that when we're in love with people we don't know that we're in love with a name that we don't know yet, as if we're actually the hand writing the name. thought-provoking this is.
    love this line

    Your name written is a fine art indeed
    My heart is the paper
    Your love is the ink

    nothing too fancy but executed perfectly.

    | Posted on 2011-12-28 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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