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    dots Submission Name: They Talkdots

    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       For all of us that has ever been in high school lol

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    dotsThey Talkdots

    They talk
    they talk about the way you walk
    they talk about your ways
    for too many days
    cry one, single tear, for them over there
    because inside they are only bare
    You'd think you came from outer space
    By the way they talk about your face
    Do they have nothing better to do
    than to make worthless jokes to you,
    Someone who does nothing at all
    I really hope their having a ball
    You sit and look in their direction
    Helpless to their sneering infections.
    You realize you must face your fear
    You know your plan is clear

    you stand up a walk into the pits of hell
    Just as you speak there goes the bell

    ~ Ms. understood

    Submitted on 2011-12-29 08:52:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know how your feeling. I've been there too. So many times. I've always been a bit of what you could call an 'outcast' for the things I do, music I listen to and like, the way I draw, and the way I talk. You are right though. It does seem like people have nothing at all better to do than to talk about, and make other people feel bad. I truly hate it when other people ave nothing better to do in their spare time than to make people feel so bad they cry or even worse.

    My Favorite two lines:
    "you stand up a walk into the pits of hell
    Just as you speak there goes the bell"

    Then, yes, when they finally sum up the courage to say something to those people something stops them from doing so. It feels like you're never going to win. It only goes to show how pathetic those people who talk and talk and talk about others are. Stay strong.

    By the way, I really like your username. I love the double meaning to it.
    | Posted on 2011-12-29 00:00:00 | by stormybluerose | [ Reply to This ]

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