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    dots Submission Name: "Love's Haunting Call"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
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    dots"Love's Haunting Call"dots
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    The piercing cry of Gulls
    echoed a haunting call
    that sounded like a cry for love
    and the mystery of it all.

    As waves lashed at the shore
    and returned again to Sea
    love's haunting call tenderly
    brought memories to me;

    they took my thoughts back to a day
    when the Sun was shining bright,
    and to the love we'd shared
    in the cover of the night.

    It was our last encounter
    and many years have passed
    since duty took us both away
    though our passions stubbornly last.

    And now love's haunting call
    arises from the Sea
    with a tender call of love
    stirring memories in me.




    Submitted on 2011-12-29 12:15:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW that was awesome. The passion, emotion, the tenderness. Well written. Looking forward to reading more of your writes
    | Posted on 2012-05-09 00:00:00 | by illusions35904 | [ Reply to This ]
      You are amazing... love this it is very toughing.
    | Posted on 2012-03-27 00:00:00 | by PrettyHeart | [ Reply to This ]
      This was just beautiful, loved reading it. I liked this part soo much :

    they took my thoughts back to a day
    when the Sun was shining bright,
    and to the love we'd shared
    in the cover of the night.

    I've read many of your poems and am never dissapointe. Thanks for sharing them with us. Desi
    | Posted on 2012-03-18 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
      Love can be heard in the song of birds, the wind in the meadows and blowing in the trees. We need just listen, to here a recalling of a fond love and a kindness shown by a stranger or friend.
    Beautufully written Ron, bringing good thoughts to the reader.
    | Posted on 2012-03-09 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      very lovely, thank you for your work. i agree with the poster above about the seagulls having a sad persistant cry.
    | Posted on 2011-12-30 00:00:00 | by KeeperOfLight | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely!

    The gulls have a memorable cry...persistent and sad. And it is the perfect vehicle for stimulating a memory, since many of those are also persistent and sad.
    But, you seem to take the view that it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all...
    that seems to be a good perspective.

    I'm happy to read another of your wonderful poems, Ron!
    Keep up the great work.
    | Posted on 2011-12-29 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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