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Author: extrEMO
ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 77 /57 /29
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Class/Type: Misc /Serious
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I got a random urge to start writing something emotional. I sat at my computer and started typing and this is the result.


The worst feeling ever
When you know that what you love
Is completely impossible
And no matter how much you wish
It can never come true

This feeling is inside everybody
At one point or another
And although we all know it
Some more than others
It sucks

This feeling can beat you down
It will destroy you
Physically and mentally
Until you just cant fight it anymore
And spiral into depression

Eventually the feeling will fade
The scars will heal
And you will move on
Slowly, but steadily
Life will get better

Then that one slip up
That one mistake
And you are back into your spiral
It begins again
And you want to give up

Just keep holding on
Keep your head up
Remember to yourself
Nothing is impossible
There are people that care

So if you are in the spiral
And you are reading this
Just know one thing
Im there with you, falling
And I care

I care about you
I will comfort you
Others care as well
You aren't alone in this world
You are never alone.

Submitted on 2011-12-29 22:43:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I agree, the flow was good. I applaud you, keep up the good writing.
| Posted on 2012-01-13 00:00:00 | by Jawsh00 | [ Reply to This ]
  Itz true..
I liked has a good flow :)
| Posted on 2011-12-31 00:00:00 | by Pribin | [ Reply to This ]

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