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    dots Submission Name: Another Yeardots
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    Author: Pribin
    Elite Ratio:    1.39 - 1/3/3
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Another year ready to blossom..Let's prepare ourself to welcome that with a beautiful heart.


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    dotsAnother Yeardots
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    The Earth is returning back to its starting point. Few more hours to go and it will reach its starting point which marks the end of 2011 and the beginning of 2012. When the Earth makes a new beginning, let's also join with it to start a new beginning in our life.
    Forget the painful moments in your life,
    Forget the ones who have hurt you,
    Forget your sorrows,
    Forget all the unhappy things that happened in your life..
    The great teacher, Experience, have taught us many things in our life. Forget all the characters in those chapters who have made a negative impact on your life..and remember only the moral of those chapters so that it will help you in the long run.
    Remember we all are alone atleast in some point of life. Only you were there for you yesterday, today and will be there for you tomorrow. So Love yourself.. am not asking you to be selfish. Love everyone but never allow anyone to hurt you and steal your happiness away from you.
    Next year this time when you looks back you should have only good memories.
    When you compare your gains and losses
    your gains must be more than your losses,
    your happiness must be more than your sadness,
    your achievements must be more than your failures,
    you must be a winner and not a looser.
    Tomorrow morning will see a new person in you..a positive person with positive thoughts and positive feelings who loves everybody and everything in this world.
    Let us Thank The Almighty for blessing us to see the beautiful morning of 2012.

    Wish you all a very Happy and Blessed New Year !! :)




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      very powerfull,.... can feel the emotions in this writting
    | Posted on 2012-01-23 00:00:00 | by janekostman09 | [ Reply to This ]


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