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    dots Submission Name: Belief ?dots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    dotsBelief ?dots
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    What is belief?
    Is it death and strife?
    Is it light and life?
    Belief is exactly what it says
    You have to fully believe
    That what you believe will pull you through
    At times itís tough
    And sometimes itís rough
    You feel like your world is crashing down
    Like youíre falling but thereís no ground
    You think your tears will never end
    And you must twist and bend
    But belief isnít always what it seems
    To believe you must love
    To love you must trust
    Belief is a labyrinth
    There are so many twists and turns
    It can make you free or make you burn.




    Submitted on 2011-12-31 09:41:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i second the first comment....

    nice analogy...strong piece.


    like the labyrinth part too.
    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-12-31 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      "To believe you must love
    To love you must trust
    Belief is a labyrinth
    There are so many twists and turns
    It can make you free or make you burn."

    This is a brilliant description of faith...that particular kind of belief that allows us to go on in the face of adversity and allows us to risk pain to embrace love.

    Nicely done.
    | Posted on 2011-12-31 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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