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    dots Submission Name: "A New Year Is Bright Upon Us"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
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    The old year is now history
    and part of yesterday.
    A new year's bright upon us,
    a tomorrow for which we pray.

    So may we act with kindness
    as we bring the new year in,
    and may the Lord forgive us
    for our many human sins.

    May the light of love be a guiding star
    to brighten our pathway;
    may hope and faith and words of trust
    be a part of every day.

    And, may the clouds that darken minds
    be scattered by the Sun;
    may goodness find a willing place
    in the hearts of everyone.

    And, last of all but not the least,
    may every home be blessed,
    with good fortune and the love of God,
    and all of Heaven's best.




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      This poem is very uplifting and spiritual. You feel good when you read it. Hope and faith and words of trust be part of every day.... that is what we need. Thanks. Gen
    | Posted on 2012-03-21 00:00:00 | by Wonderwords | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written, a word of hope for the coming year, of love to be cherished , not taken for granted. Thanks RON for sharing . have a good year my friend.
    | Posted on 2012-02-24 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Ron,

    Again a great poem. To ask for love of God is the most cherished wish for the New Year. If we get and have love and faith for God we will get everything in our lives.
    | Posted on 2012-01-22 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      we look back with thanks
    forward with hope in our hearts
    praying for love's grace
    souls ablaze, pillars of light
    peace and love will reign all hearts
    | Posted on 2012-01-04 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a great new years poem. it touches on the things that matter most and is completely heart-warming. it has a prayer-like quality to it which really draws me. as we say good bye to last year, we hope for God's blessing for the birth of this one...


    another great piece, Ron.


    ciao
    -JP
    | Posted on 2012-01-03 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]


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