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    dots Submission Name: Emotionless Mandots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 635
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    Description:
       I was dating my first boyfriend and he severely broke my heart. on the day before i was supposed to go to Islands of Adventure with my friend. he broke up with me after 2 years with no reason. Age 14


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    dotsEmotionless Mandots
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    A cry shatters the silent night
    A cry so loud it sends a fright

    how are you Emotionless man?
    What emotions do you ban?

    How can you love without a heart?
    I thought you loved me from the start

    Do you care that my soul is gone?
    I don’t even know where I belong

    what did you do emotionless boy?
    Why’d you pick my heart 4 a toy?

    Good-bye emotionless man
    I hope 2 god this was part of your plan




    Submitted on 2012-01-01 11:44:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a heartfelt and searching piece. we have all had our hearts broken and the dreams of love crushed, you capture the pain well here. it also feels like it can be a song as well.


    good job.


    -JP
    | Posted on 2012-01-02 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]


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