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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
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    Okay for once in my life i understood something for happing and i feel like a better person :) I didnt want to get up for church but i forced myself to go. Its not that i do or dont want people to judge me for that because i know most of them will, but Im just lazy and my mom lets me do it. So i went and i had to sit with my baba. I love that man with all my heart just like my doda and aunts florence and ursula :) Anyways I sat next to him and he was like 'what they just draged you outta bed? ehh! ' and i replied 'yessh im not a early raiser' we both laughed and he pushed my arm jokingly. then we had to sit and he had the Parish Bulletin, he had about five actualy. he opened one and looked threw the pages. I watched because, well I dont listen in chruch, I hear but i dont listen. anyways.... My baba showed me a page. it had no number, at the bottom of the page, it said in bold letters 'IE:SOS ROTERENNAIENTAHTSHERISON THE LODR'S PRAYER' he asked 'you know how to read, right?' i nooded and said 'yeah' he then said 'read it then' I looked around because everyone was quite and he asked so i was like out aloud. ? then i started to read I never seen these words in my life and i tried to read then he said 'you read it in english way' So i tried in my head over and over to say the thing. But I cant not yet. when i said it a while ago i felt like a heavyness on my heart lifted a wee bit. and I had a vision or dream of my baba singing to me in kanienkeha till i fall asleep then it ends with 'konoronkhwa Katsi'tsahen:te' then I wake up, so i told my mom about my dreams and we thought it had something important because its a repeated dream. Anywho i just realized that the dream has to do with this kanienkeha lord's prayer




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