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    dots Submission Name: Deskdots
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    Author: Solomon Disease
    ASL Info:    101, male, earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 284/292/104
    Words: 321
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDeskdots
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    Desk is cluttered as always
    Random stuff thrown everywhere
    Made some plans to organize and reorganize
    Just don't seem to have the urge to do it though
    Sometimes I look at it and it feels like everything is at its proper place
    Random stuff of various kinds
    Things that can be easily discernible are:
    CDs
    DVDs
    Pens
    Pens
    and more Pens
    Paper - lined
    Paper - plain white
    Paper - with drawings
    Paper - with writings
    Scribbles
    Thoughts
    Plans
    Dreams
    Desires

    And books - so many books to read so little time, so I just take the easy way out, I pile them up and don't read them
    Just look at them
    A pile of books have a certain beauty to them

    Well, it is a New Year - so time to actually set somethings in motion
    Roll the dice
    And hopefully I'll get to pass go and collect 200 white chocolate macadamia nut cookies
    Some people don't enjoy those
    I don't care
    Life goes on

    I met a very interesting person - he was giving a talk
    and we had a quick conversation afterwards
    We started talking about one of the people we both admire

    "The great ones are all bonkers man - be bonkers. Those who don't understand - let them be, life goes on. They'll go their own way and we'll go our own, and who knows, just because we dared to be different and original - things happened. People are afraid to be unique, they want to belong and they want to be an individual - such a paradox. The simple thing - forget belonging, if everyone is an individual then we can all belong as individuals, deep, huh? Just have fun, be bonkers and everything will fall into place - life is way too short."

    So the conclusion - be bonkers.

    And a Happy New Year :)





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      This was really refreshing, life goes on, yes it certainly does. I liked that you kept this consisent with that theme, that the structure supported that concept.

    I can definately relate to this piece, I have a desk of my own with piles of books and clutter that I would like to attack.
    | Posted on 2012-01-04 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      And a Happy New Year to you too, right on, I just loved this write ,the last line the most cause its sooo true.life is to short an I'll take being bonkers anyday. no wonder I always seem to have so much fun I'm bonkers.keep up the writes
    adnil
    | Posted on 2012-01-02 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]


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