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    dots Submission Name: Cornmeal Fillerdots
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    Author: writeous
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 0/2/18
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    Cant seem to want to be alive much
    feels like its been years
    since I can remember
    a little girl
    dashes of hope, here and there, but only for the future.
    I dont live for the future,cuz we can die now
    and if the now is a constant burden, rarely not, then what?
    I dont want to turn depression into a habit of being
    people write about winning the fight with it.
    others talk about how its not a choice

    from this margin, it feels like forever and never, of course I used drugs
    dont wanna be a victuum, but i gotta lug around luggage.
    frothy frothy, met a man, saucy, is a woman suppose to feel this sorta void?
    A DANCE.
    drives on to imagine the hole filled with romance, and children and a husband, and a home to clean, and to knit out the energy, and live entirely for somebody. Is she meant to be this incomplete with/ without? Is this the force of procreation, lurkin bout?
    If there was no longing there would be no sex.
    but like I said before, any cornmeal filler .can pose as a thriller, gonna keep her chasin (like shes born, like yesturday)
    any cornmeal filler, all outside the self
    I guess I use to know a pinch of this god thing, the preciousness of life, needs the subject to deem it so. It is not precious if the subject is unwary.
    I know it is. I know it is. I just dont experience it. Oh lord, how can I get back to that magic place of infinity?
    If I HAVE to be stuck with my self forever, how can I catch glimpses of you, per say, even once in a sliver?




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