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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsPariahdots
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    I am gods pariah
    the mutt of purebreds from my pack
    why is it every time a good thing comes it's swiped swiftly from my grasp
    I feel my blood turn into ice
    and my eyes roll into my head
    still watching as idea tortures my mind not knowing if it's to end in a happily ever after
    or in my demise




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