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Gone


Author: MsUnderstood
ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26 /21 /22
Words: 129
Class/Type: Poetry /Fuck it all
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i dont usually like to curse in my poems so i dont know what was going through my mind at this time in my life. i found this in a book that i was writing lol


Gone


The trust we had is gone

I don't feel I belong

I hate to be a bitch

But my feelings are starting to itch

They scream from within

And I want them to have been

A thing of the past

But I can’t seem to grasp

All the pain you've given me as well as I you

And everything I say must be true

Why else wouldn't I think of you?

We argue too much

And my heart's in a bunch

I need to be alone

But what I want to have shown

is that our love hasn’t grown

so good bye and good luck

I no longer give a fuck




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