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    dots Submission Name: Gonedots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 804
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       i dont usually like to curse in my poems so i dont know what was going through my mind at this time in my life. i found this in a book that i was writing lol


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    dotsGonedots
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    The trust we had is gone

    I don't feel I belong

    I hate to be a bitch

    But my feelings are starting to itch

    They scream from within

    And I want them to have been

    A thing of the past

    But I canít seem to grasp

    All the pain you've given me as well as I you

    And everything I say must be true

    Why else wouldn't I think of you?

    We argue too much

    And my heart's in a bunch

    I need to be alone

    But what I want to have shown

    is that our love hasnít grown

    so good bye and good luck

    I no longer give a fuck




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