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F ~ is for how fucked up I really am inside
E ~ is for the excuses I make up in my mind
L ~ is for the lies I constantly tell myself
I ~ is for the ignorance I have for everyone else
C ~ is for the constant worry for everyone I know
I ~ is for the innocence I wish I had to show
A ~ is for the apathy I wish I never had
See my name does nothing but make me sad
~ Ms. Understood
Submitted on 2012-01-04 13:07:10
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Is it wrong to say this is fun? I felt like I was watching a cynical cheerleader. Shaking her pom-poms and jumping up and down, all the while rolling her eyes.
It has a level of negativity to it, but the style makes it seem almost to be sarcasm rather than genuine emotion.
Regardless of whether I'm getting the intended effect or not, I enjoyed reading this.
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