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    dots Submission Name: Our Beating Heartsdots

    Author: Dark Dann
    ASL Info:    18/ Male/ San Diego
    Elite Ratio:    6.44 - 78/67/53
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsOur Beating Heartsdots

    Our hearts are beating,

    yet you're hardly breathing

    Check the way you hold on tight

    Your heart is beating

    You can hardly feel it

    Don't hide away all the pain inside

    Cause you don't know what I'd do

    You never felt this way, before

    You feel your soul is dead, inside

    But I'm still breathing

    And I'm holding your hand through all this shit

    So hold on tight

    Let's take a ride

    Feel the emptiness inside ( disappear)

    Seconds, move slowly this time

    But I'm still here, holding on tight

    Don't lie to me

    Don't hide from me

    I only want to make you feel, alive

    Don't hide from me

    Don't run from me.

    I only want you to stay alive

    Seconds are fleeting,

    And no matter what happens

    I'd drive a confession

    I'd find all your obessions.

    It just so happens

    Your hearts still beating

    I can feel it's pulse

    I can hear it loudly

    and my head is about to explode

    I saved you now

    And so you know

    I'd do it again, again again

    Without a regret!

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      Consistent dark tones. Unapologetic & rhythmic. Well done.
    | Posted on 2013-01-17 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]

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