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    dots Submission Name: Choicedots
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    Author: EW61
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 131/71/51
    Words: 246
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 574
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1852



    Description:
       WORK IN PROGRESS:
    Inspired by Tarot Card VI: The Lovers
    The card highlights the ultimate Existential dilemma: With freedom comes the responsibility to choose (A major source of anxiety for many).


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    dotsChoicedots
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    "Oracle,
    Wisewoman see
    Tell me who
    I am to be."

    I give her trinket
    Things of mine
    She'll hold them close
    Then close her eyes

    Beyond the seasons
    Spirits fly
    Surpassing reason
    Wisdom rides

    Past worries
    Doubts
    and human laws
    We reach the land
    Above it all

    “Oracle,
    Just see me through
    Tell me what I'm
    meant to do”

    My questions
    Shiver shake and seize
    Refract, reflect
    Revealing me

    She looks at
    me through kind blue eyes
    "You know your answer
    Lives inside."

    She reads through past
    and present tense
    Reviewing major
    Life events

    "Oracle,
    Will I be free?
    What does the future
    Hold for me?"

    "I read the trends
    where you may be
    The choice is yours
    Free will
    Will be”

    In crystal light
    I dare to see
    My life in
    shades of clarity

    Options free flow
    wistfully
    Past fear of failure
    Bravely be

    “Divine Spirit
    guide me through
    I pray for wisdom
    Me through You”

    Through fearful
    Doubt and happenstance
    I see my way
    and take a chance

    My Oracle
    On wisdom rides
    She blows a kiss
    Then waves good -bye

    Though trends foreshadowed
    Lay in wait
    The outcome
    Rides past certain fate

    Oracle,
    I stake my claim
    Lesson learned,
    I now proclaim:

    If I long to be so free
    I must own my destiny




    Submitted on 2012-01-05 15:47:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this poem it has great flow and its very attractive to the eye. i enjoyed it. it was a little long for my taste but i still loved it
    | Posted on 2012-01-06 00:00:00 | by MsUnderstood | [ Reply to This ]


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