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    dots Submission Name: My silencedots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    26/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 136/243/154
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy silencedots
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    A-glossed betrayed superpostioned
    The silence rubbed into my face
    I faltered cowered to submission
    And let the throat lump limp its course.




    Submitted on 2012-01-05 18:07:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      In all shock it seems to come without warning. No scarlet warning sign no sound from astray. A longing unknowingly, but leaves pain in your hands. Holding inside of you is this. In submission I have laid too, but in time, comfort, and support. We find the way through this distress. Love the write
    | Posted on 2012-04-30 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]


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