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    dots Submission Name: Jamesdots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 333
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 539



    Description:
       I wrote this at 17 for my boyfriend James


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    dotsJamesdots
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    Everything is different

    Iíve never felt like this

    The serenity, this peaceful bliss

    My heart is racing

    Thinking so hard my mind is pacing

    Donít know what to do or even what to say

    I want to be with you every single day

    My love that I cannot control

    Not that I mind

    With our bodies intertwined

    You make me feel like no one has before

    I hope we can stay forever more




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