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    dots Submission Name: Im not scared anymoredots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 365
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       I read this book and i was inspired by the turn around this book had. the judgement that was served to this horrible man for what he did to his child.


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    dotsIm not scared anymoredots
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    You say youíll hurt me go ahead
    inside I am completely dead
    Youíve hurt me many times before
    I donít fucking care anymore
    Beat me, rape me, itís all the same
    Until thereís nothing left but pain
    And whatever it is you gain
    My cuts and bruises theyíll all fade
    But the damage had already been laid
    My mind so twisted I canít control
    I wanted to die or crawl in a hole
    But somehow I got out
    Just to spite your heavy doubt
    I come back unsacred
    Ready to fight, always prepared
    Cuts and slashes one by one
    Until my revenge is done
    Death is only what lie for you now
    From this little girl who now knows how
    To take away the power you had
    Welcome your death ď dad ď




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      Flow was good i appreciate a piece that i can read and it flows and keeps me going til the end. Good job, Def keep it up.
    | Posted on 2012-01-13 00:00:00 | by Jawsh00 | [ Reply to This ]


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