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    dots Submission Name: Wait for Medots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    Description:
       I wrote this poem 3 yrs ago when my grandfather passed away. i wrote it for his wake for my grandmother to hear. this is for her to him.

    RIP Grandpa Walter


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    dotsWait for Medots
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    You've take the journey to paradise alone
    but donít worry my love someday Iíll be home

    Please wait for me up there my dear
    and Iíll try not to shed a tear

    You'll be in my heart forever
    our love, no one can sever

    I will never regret
    your love for which I canít forget

    You will always be in my heart
    from the end back to the start

    it's ok that you let go
    because your love I will always know




    Submitted on 2012-01-09 08:15:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Losing a loved one can, be painful, and recovery can be difficult, and you did a very good job of illustrating those feeling. Great work.


    Sage
    | Posted on 2012-01-26 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]


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