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    dots Submission Name: To refuse the modern mindsetdots

    Author: ParanoidParadox
    ASL Info:    22/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.31 - 89/92/41
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsTo refuse the modern mindsetdots

    I spend my days opiating my weakness
    Ignoring torment that I feel deep within
    Another day, another line on my face
    Another hour that I will surely regret
    Becoming a demon that I once despised
    Misanthropy and fraudulence fill my eyes
    To be a modern man is to bow in submittance
    A faceless figure obedient and self loathing
    No more
    I refuse to accept this negligence of my own spirit
    To chase these inane concepts of fufillment fed to me is an abomination
    The prize is hostility and self destruction
    I was born a cynic and an outcast
    It's time to accept that role
    To forsake the arrogance that fed indulgences
    Brought me down the road of endless distraction
    Question the meaning behind every action
    Become the man that I was born to be
    Modernity has led my heroes into ruin
    I shall no longer deify my fellow man
    My birthright is to be a cynic and an outcast
    I was born to accept the role

    Submitted on 2012-01-09 19:59:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey hi i really liked this somethings are harder than others to face i think it depends on the company we keep and choose as real friends that we can show are true demons too
    ita funny i read this today i am working on something myself called family album its similar to your thoughts but different demons after 50 years
    great work for a fellow canadian

    | Posted on 2012-01-24 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Accepting ones self is no easy feat. I personally know the challenge and just how tough it can be to just say fuck it..(in a nut shell) Bravo with coming to terms with who you really are and being content with being just that...you. :)
    | Posted on 2012-01-12 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]

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