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    dots Submission Name: Words that don't need saiddots

    Author: FadeStones
    Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 1/4/5
    Words: 216
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Fallen_Nightwing, on Wattpad wrote this. Quoting for me. Not my actual boyfriend.

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    dotsWords that don't need saiddots

    I look into your eyes,
    Seeing a beautiful girl,
    Kissing me with her beauty,

    Blinding me as I close my eyes,
    Kisses so soft,
    I think I'm on a cloud,

    The embrace gives me chills,
    Sliding my hands,
    Around her waist,

    She kisses harder,
    Her hands down my back,
    Makes me move closer,

    Standing here,
    With her,
    Time freezes,

    All worries,
    All thoughts,
    Drain from reality,

    The center of my attention,
    I blush as she giggles with delight,

    My heart skips a beat,
    When I flow my fingers thru her hair,
    Like silk on my skin,

    The lights dim,
    As the plot reaches its turning point,
    Stumbling to the floor,

    She stands in the ray of sunlight,
    Making her a shining angel from heaven,
    All senses fade,

    As I tear at her shirt,
    Pulling her closer,
    Into a deep kiss,

    I edge at her pants,
    She bits my bottom lip,
    Thoughts racing through my head,

    Kisses deeper than before,
    The final kiss makes light disappear,
    She disappears into the shadows,

    Like its the end of the show,
    Leaving the story unsaid,
    Love doesn't need words to be read.

    - Fallen_Nightwing ~ Wattpad ~ Arwin Smith

    Submitted on 2012-01-11 12:53:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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