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    dots Submission Name: Trying Not To Leave A Print In Claydots
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    Author: DearlyDeparted
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 211/290/189
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsTrying Not To Leave A Print In Claydots
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    Forget me;
    if you will...

    I believe these fingers have yet to leave an imprint.
    Pardon if I'm wrong.

    I was careful;
    in trying not to...




    Submitted on 2012-01-11 21:41:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh i really like this piece...

    could mean a lot of things...almost could be the fingers of the poet typing his or her poems..wanting to be anonymous--not intentionally wanting to be great or well known....but leaving an imprint almost inadvertantly...

    and it could be a relationship---didn't mean to leave such an imprint on your life...

    few words leave room for lots of thoughts..


    good good good

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-01-15 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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