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    dots Submission Name: im sorry that im not sorrydots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsim sorry that im not sorrydots
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    is it wrong
    that all i ever wanted was to be like you
    the rich girl without a care in the world
    you never felt bottled up
    never used and abused
    you had everything at your feet
    while i had to beg for the same feat
    and just like all the other spoiled little rich girls
    you never showed empathy
    you never showed remorse
    you thought the world was their to revolve around you
    but how it must burn
    to know just how we all think about you
    we smile at you
    because its easier then dealing with the truth
    so im sorry that i was your best friend for so long
    im sorry that i wanted everything you had
    it took some time for me to figure out
    that everything i had was more then enough
    i had parents that loved me
    and that was alot more precious to me
    then anything your money could buy
    so im sorry that im not sorry anymore
    because you are the one who pushed me out the door
    you made it impossible for our relationship to bend
    so it shattered and i walked away instead
    im sorry sometimes for the way things were left
    and i still miss you.. its like an ache that never left
    but times are moving
    and times are changing.




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