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    dots Submission Name: You (God) and Medots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 265/107/52
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       In this poem I have described an ideal relationship between God and a human being.


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    dots You (God) and Medots
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    My mind, body and soul is Your's.
    You are absorbed in me
    and I am absorbed in You.
    Such is the love between me and You.




    Submitted on 2012-01-14 23:43:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It is only when you totally surrender to the Lord can you experience this type of intimacy. Jesus said, "Love your God, with all your heart, with all your mind and with all your soul, this is the first and greatest commandment."

    Love of Christ,

    Christie
    | Posted on 2012-01-16 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      Am I to understand from this that you consider God to be a self-conscious entity? Why do you believe this? Being an agnostic I do not deny the existence of god, but I'm not really expecting an interactive experience.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-01-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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