You (God) and Me by Ramneet

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dots

<< | >>

Submission Name: You (God) and Me dots

--------------------------------------------------------

Author:	Ramneet
ASL Info:	33/F/Boston
Elite Ratio:	2.98 - 267/107/54
Words:	26

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	692
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	145

Description:
In this poem I have described an ideal relationship between God and a human being.

You (God) and Me dots

-------------------------------------------

My mind, body and soul is Your's.
You are absorbed in me
and I am absorbed in You.
Such is the love between me and You.

Submitted on 2012-01-14 23:43:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

||| Comments |||
It is only when you totally surrender to the Lord can you experience this type of intimacy. Jesus said, "Love your God, with all your heart, with all your mind and with all your soul, this is the first and greatest commandment."

Love of Christ,

Christie
| Posted on 2012-01-16 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
Am I to understand from this that you consider God to be a self-conscious entity? Why do you believe this? Being an agnostic I do not deny the existence of god, but I'm not really expecting an interactive experience.

Bruce
| Posted on 2012-01-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece? 7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?

193924

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.
To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
Wasps written by Wolfwatching
In My Head written by faideddarkness
In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
I will call out your name written by RisingSon
Summer written by layDsayD
Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
What happens written by Wolfwatching
Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
Push written by JanePlane
Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
Linger written by saartha
Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
4th of July written by layDsayD
Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
Trails written by Daniel Barlow
The Promise written by annie0888
To written by SavedDragon
Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
Wish written by Daniel Barlow
It's Night Now written by RisingSon
Wavelength written by saartha
Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon

Enter your search terms Submit search form

Web www.eliteskills.com

[ Quick Signup ]
[ Lost Password ]

January 10 07
131,497 Poems
Posted

I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

[ Angst Poetry ]
[ Cutters ]
[ Famous Poetry ]
[ Poetry Scams ]

FontSize:
[ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.