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    dots Submission Name: Sisters Before Mistersdots
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    Author: SammySueYou
    ASL Info:    23/f/nm
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 90/78/30
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 988
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    Description:
       I recently had a falling out with a person I was best friends with for 10+ years. This poem is just some good old venting I guess.


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    dotsSisters Before Mistersdots
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    Lost indiscretions
    of childhood aggressions,
    floating in a pool
    of thrown away confessions.
    Puzzling through a maze
    with blinding shades of red,
    going crazy with a madness
    that festers inside of your head.
    Hearing rumors that hit your eardrums
    with decibel sounds,
    the truth is an unknown frequency to you
    and it quite honestly astounds.
    You never knew what love was,
    though you pretended to recall,
    a relationship you learned nill from
    and gained no maturity at all.
    We once said in unison
    "sisters before misters,"
    now all you want to do to me
    is cover me in blisters.
    A guy that walks right past you
    just to talk to me,
    is not one that deserves your affections,
    I am sure logic would agree.
    I always tried to be there
    with a compliment each day,
    you tossed it back like garbage
    and shuffled me away.
    Each piercing word that cut at me
    you said for many years,
    I shoved them in a bottle
    and let it fill to spare your tears.
    All of these things
    don't really matter much to me,
    it's my love for you above all
    i wish that you could see.
    I will cherish the good times
    and I will regret the bad,
    You were the closest best friend
    I have ever had.




    Submitted on 2012-01-16 14:41:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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