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    dots Submission Name: No Onedots
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    Author: FadeStones
    Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 1/4/5
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsNo Onedots
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    No one says I'm the best
    No one says I'm not the same
    No one even notices me
    No one even sees me

    Just turn the corner
    All hell breaks lose
    Newbie
    Newbie

    On the wall
    Will the newbie make it thru
    Fly
    Fly
    Fly away

    No one seems to care
    No one
    No one notices me
    No one even guesses who I am

    Newbie
    Newbie
    On the wall
    Fly
    Fly
    Fly away

    Like a butterfly
    Pretty
    Pretty
    Butterfly
    Small or Big

    No one notices me
    No one seems to care
    Newbie
    Newbie

    On the wall
    Fly away
    Fly away
    Like a pretty butterfly




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      Hmmm, Yes noobs are always outside the circle, but if you are determined you can force yourself in, and become an irreplaceable member of the group.


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    | Posted on 2012-01-26 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]


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