No One

Author: FadeStones Elite Ratio:    0.67 - 1 /4 /5 Words: 116

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No One

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No one says I'm the best No one says I'm not the same No one even notices me No one even sees me Just turn the corner All hell breaks lose Newbie Newbie On the wall Will the newbie make it thru Fly Fly Fly away No one seems to care No one No one notices me No one even guesses who I am Newbie Newbie On the wall Fly Fly Fly away Like a butterfly Pretty Pretty Butterfly Small or Big No one notices me No one seems to care Newbie Newbie On the wall Fly away Fly away Like a pretty butterfly

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Hmmm, Yes noobs are always outside the circle, but if you are determined you can force yourself in, and become an irreplaceable member of the group. Sage

| Posted on 2012-01-26 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]

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