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    dots Submission Name: Lifedots

    Author: annie smith
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 75/61/24
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Listen closely and you will hear
    voices pleading very near.

    They're begging you to take heed
    of the ones most in need.

    Young or old, kind or cold,
    listen now to what you're told.

    In the shadows, lurking unseen,
    lies more than what is mean.

    Floating just beyond your grasp,
    are wonders that will make you gasp.

    So, listen closely and you will hear
    voices pleading very near.

    Urging you to live your life,
    persevere no matter the strife.

    Submitted on 2012-01-20 06:22:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Persevere indeed! Outstanding write with an excellent philosophical message, pretty lady!
    | Posted on 2012-01-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      yes, listen to those voices...be aware of the good things life has given us...

    it's a blessing to be alive...and we seldom realize all the good things life gives us...

    we are too busy striving to get more...and just rushing along.

    like this piece a lot

    | Posted on 2012-01-20 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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