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life worth living


Author: caldewith
ASL Info:    23/male/jupiter
Elite Ratio:    1.75 - 3 /5 /9
Words: 101
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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life worth living



What if life is realy not worth living
What if we are all pupets in the world of the grand puppetier
Will the oks come the your not alone I'm here ever b heard
If you have tell me
Let me know that there may still be hope in this crule world

If life is suppose to be lived to its fullest
Then why does mine seem so empty and dry
And why when life seems to offer good
It quicly changes its mind.

Hope is for thoes who have hope
I seem to no longer have any




Submitted on 2012-01-20 11:35:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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