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    dots Submission Name: Misfitdots
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    Author: BevRead
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 20/41/28
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       I am speaking in a spiritual sense


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    dots Misfitdots
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    Blankets of course wool cover my whole body save my toes
    or my nose
    if I position myself a little different

    the longer I lay here I wonder where all these holes came from
    and why I cannot shrink myself enough to fit




    Submitted on 2012-01-20 12:29:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love the double meaning of the title...

    we are misfits in some way...all of us....

    and often what we want our lives to be doesn't quite fit into what our lives become...always the toes or the nose just sticking out from under.

    but spiritually...i am sure the man upstairs understands that...we are human...and we do our best to tailor ourselves to what is right.

    i love the way you write about humans....and just how human we are.

    people can be so judgemental and not give others a break...
    this kind of stuff is refreshing to read.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-08-24 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      It took two times to read but I got how the title fits with it. It made me smile :)
    | Posted on 2012-01-20 00:00:00 | by caldewith | [ Reply to This ]


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