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    dots Submission Name: Scared to sleepdots
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    Author: DeathTone
    ASL Info:    32 / Male / United States
    Elite Ratio:    5.54 - 81/55/30
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsScared to sleepdots
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    I get scared to sleep at night
    Because my dreams cause me such a fright
    When I close my eyes images dance around my head
    Seeing visions of the dead
    They chase after me every day or night I sleep
    The images cause me to suffer and weep
    I can only be so strong
    I can only hold on so long
    So I take pills to stay awake
    With happiness that I fake
    There is no more debate
    I guess this is forever my fate




    Submitted on 2012-01-20 12:52:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Dreams have deeper meanings then just the surface images. Maybe determining the route of these dreams is the key to getting rid of them. Try paying more attention to detail while your dreaming.
    ~Dominique
    | Posted on 2012-01-30 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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