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    dots Submission Name: Just what i needed SKitdots
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    Author: luvy
    ASL Info:    19/F/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 270/168/35
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJust what i needed SKitdots
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    Idea for skit
    Suicide hotline
    Person calls hotline depressed and ready to kill themselves
    Ghetto person answers and instructs them step by step to smoke weed.
    Depressed guy (DG): I've lost everything my kids wife girlfriend and job. I can't take it and i'm going to end it all.
    HOtline girl: Wait before you do where are you located?
    DG: I'm by fourth and main
    HG: I know i great therapist who hangs aorund the 7/11 on 6th and main go see him and he'll prescribe great medicine
    DG: that sounds kind of shady
    HG: trust me
    DG:ok
    he hops in his car and drives over to the 7/11 and finds marcus
    DG:I'm here
    HG: hand the phone to marcus
    He does and they talk for a minute and marcus hands the phone over and procedes to light up a joint
    HG: now grab the medicine from marcus bring it to your lips inhale deeply hold it think happy thoughts you thinkion happy thoughts? Exhale. How do you feel?
    DG: fantastic man
    HG: i know marcus gots that good shit
    DG: like fuck that bitch she was getiing fat anyways and those kids were always screamin i will need a job though.
    HG: utilize the medication again sir
    He takes another hit
    DG: man fuck that job this is the vacation i've bene looking for. Thanks ma'am this is just what i needed
    Scene ends




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