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Revelation of Memories


Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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In this poem I have tried to reveal the power and value of memories which we all possess.


Revelation of Memories



Memories engraved in the heart.
Memories embedded in the mind.
What is there,
without memories in life.

Memories are the entity.
Memories are the treasure.
What is there,
without memories in life.

Memories are the past.
Fleeting time is becoming memories.
Memories are like an ocean,
where the past is submerged.
What is there,
without memories in life.

Memories harbor life to your life.
Memories impart strength, inspiration and motivation.
Memories build confidence.
Memories boost the morale.
What is there,
without memories in life.

Ingenious people depart but leave their memories behind by their accomplishments.
They are alive in this world and in other’s hearts by their cherished memories.
What is there,
without memories in life.












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  This is engrossing and an excellent write Ram. Indeed, our memories are the bible of our past..

Nice work, pretty lady!
| Posted on 2012-02-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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