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    dots Submission Name: unleasheddots

    Author: robbie
    ASL Info:    20/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 53/54/36
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    locked away i kept myself fully content
    untill i met you then i fell in desent
    i came crashing down to the ground
    but when i hit i didnt make a sound
    i looked in to your eyes again i fell
    only this time it was in to your hell
    the one you put me thru so far
    im already pushed to the bar
    tiered already of lies mistrust and deceit
    you want me down before your feet
    i wish youd just tell me the real deal
    and what it is you truely feel
    dont play no games with my head
    i dont stand for that shit,i mean what i said
    look in to my eyes theres a besat i try to hide
    its not hard to see its right there inside
    your not the maker of what i hold
    but your building the fire to what was set cold
    if you push to far it will arise
    an then wont you be in a big suprise
    when the real me comes out
    no time to run and shout
    but look at what you unleashed
    look good

    Submitted on 2012-01-23 20:07:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Choppy, but good. There are several spelling and grammatical errors, but the feeling is real so I'll let them pass.

    | Posted on 2012-01-28 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]

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