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    dots Submission Name: All at oncedots
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    Author: my shadow
    Elite Ratio:    4.82 - 291/150/48
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I would say to you a million words of love
    all at once,
    if I could
    I would give you a million caresses
    all at once,
    if I could
    I would give you a million kisses
    all at once,
    if I could
    I would stay by you a million years
    and more,
    if I could
    These things I would do a million years
    and more,
    if I could
    And if you give me just a chance
    I will




    Submitted on 2012-01-25 07:13:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww so sweet
    | Posted on 2014-03-07 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      Very simple yet very deep. I love it and there are never enoug words or the right words to express pure love...stormy
    | Posted on 2012-01-27 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      Short and simple. I believe this piece is good in its simplicity, in a way I feel that makes it more honest.



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    | Posted on 2012-01-25 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]
      So many times we go thru life just wanting that one chance to show someone we truly care and we're overlooked because some people only look for the right now instead of the bigger picture. Its pieces of art like these that need to be shared more often. Great job and keep it up
    | Posted on 2012-01-25 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]


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