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    dots Submission Name: Unknowndots
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    Author: nikita2u
    ASL Info:    26 Female Wonderlandlust
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 404/396/239
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 809
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 492



    Description:
       This is an old poem I've decided to dredge up from the depths of no where. Figured I'd give it a moment to shine once more :) Enjoy


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    dotsUnknowndots
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    The brush of a butterfly's wing, or the
    dance of fallen leaves, each is like a
    small taste of vintage wine.

    The blossoming colours that dance
    across swollen waves of a vast
    ocean, a child's soft touch, therein
    lies a glimpse of heaven on Earth.

    A caress of fine silk compares
    with the rough texture of tree bark.
    So many Earthly wonders,
    though each are overlooked
    with an indifferent eye.




    Submitted on 2012-01-30 18:41:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very relaxed write ...
    very down to earth - with so much compassion

    i just love this poem - "Its so choice!"
    it puts me right out side with nature .... :}

    beautiful ...

    bloodstone

    | Posted on 2012-02-17 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]
      The absolute opposite of depression ... the mind appreciating whatever comes up!

    This poem reminded me of that.
    | Posted on 2012-02-02 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      amen...who takes the time to enjoy nature or the little things in life anymore....we are all too busy...

    but a poet's eye catches the unknown and gives it texture and words...

    it is nice getting to know it.

    like this

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-01-31 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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