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Author:	nikita2u
ASL Info:	26 Female Wonderlandlust
Elite Ratio:	8 - 404/396/239
Words:	72

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	1354
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	492

Description:
This is an old poem I've decided to dredge up from the depths of no where. Figured I'd give it a moment to shine once more :) Enjoy

Unknown

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The brush of a butterfly's wing, or the
dance of fallen leaves, each is like a
small taste of vintage wine.

The blossoming colours that dance
across swollen waves of a vast
ocean, a child's soft touch, therein
lies a glimpse of heaven on Earth.

A caress of fine silk compares
with the rough texture of tree bark.
So many Earthly wonders,
though each are overlooked
with an indifferent eye.

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  very relaxed write ...
very down to earth - with so much compassion

i just love this poem - "Its so choice!"
it puts me right out side with nature .... :}

beautiful ...

bloodstone

| Posted on 2012-02-17 00:00:00 | by Bloodstone | [ Reply to This ]
  The absolute opposite of depression ... the mind appreciating whatever comes up!

This poem reminded me of that.
| Posted on 2012-02-02 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
  amen...who takes the time to enjoy nature or the little things in life anymore....we are all too busy...

but a poet's eye catches the unknown and gives it texture and words...

it is nice getting to know it.

like this

jacob
| Posted on 2012-01-31 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.