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    dots Submission Name: My Best Frienddots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    Description:
       My bestfriend of 12yrs got this new boyfriend. he is a complete douchebag. no one likes him and he alienates her from all of us. Shes beginning to choose him over us and it completely hurts my feeling. he isnt a nice guy and he wants to have her move in with him, i will never again see her if she does cuz he wont let her.......i love best friend/ my sister


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    dotsMy Best Frienddots
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    Pretty soon you will be gone

    I will be here holding strong.

    Don't take it as weakness cuz we all can see

    How you are doing without me

    Good luck and Good-bye

    hope i can see you before i die




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