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    dots Submission Name: Racing Thoughtsdots
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    Author: stormyskies
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    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRacing Thoughtsdots
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    Trying to be strong
    holding back tears.
    Facing the day
    with all its fears.
    Putting on faces
    trying to be brave.
    I the only one
    who I can save.
    Cruel past
    inspiring friends.
    Forgiving myself
    making amends.
    Wishing for more
    wanting for less.
    Not giving in
    to all this stress.
    Falling short
    rising above.
    Working on me
    falling in love.
    Lifted to heights
    feeling anew.
    Mind scattered
    security in you.
    Passing moments
    each so long.
    Knowing with you
    that I belong.




    Submitted on 2012-01-31 22:02:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Another magnificent write. I love how it flowed right off the screen and into my mind. It fit together to well that the flow was completely uninteruppted. Again, I know the feeling(s). Been there too many times.

    This is truly awesome.
    Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading.

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    | Posted on 2012-02-02 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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