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    dots Submission Name: Endless Yearningdots
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    Author: stormyskies
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    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsEndless Yearningdots
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    Cool breeze against my skin
    A natural flury from within.
    Rising tides reaching shores
    Unabatedly wanting more.

    Gentle winds blow and tease
    Soft hands that aim to please.
    Endless yearning, aching heart.
    Where you end, I do start.

    Calm before storm, completely still.
    Patter of rain upon windowsills.
    Meeting of minds we truly found.
    Never a love so profound.

    Rays of sun ever so warm
    Golden light that adorns.
    Peace, serenity, forest scent
    Entwined branches that were meant.

    Gifts of nature i compare our love to
    none truly match all i have shared with you.
    Never has another witnessed my soul
    Protecting, ensuring that it remains whole.




    Submitted on 2012-01-31 22:03:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This poem was written beautifully. I love the imagery, I love the whole thing actually.
    I know this feeling all too well.
    Being with the one that you know you're meant to be with is a feeling that cannot be compared.

    The poem was simply amazing. I have nothing left to say except
    Keep up the fantastic work and I'll keep reading.


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    | Posted on 2012-02-02 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, epic awesomeness. I give you props my friend.


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    | Posted on 2012-02-01 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]


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