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Submission Name: Endless Yearning dots

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Author:	stormyskies
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Words:	112

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
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Endless Yearning dots

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Cool breeze against my skin
A natural flury from within.
Rising tides reaching shores
Unabatedly wanting more.

Gentle winds blow and tease
Soft hands that aim to please.
Endless yearning, aching heart.
Where you end, I do start.

Calm before storm, completely still.
Patter of rain upon windowsills.
Meeting of minds we truly found.
Never a love so profound.

Rays of sun ever so warm
Golden light that adorns.
Peace, serenity, forest scent
Entwined branches that were meant.

Gifts of nature i compare our love to
none truly match all i have shared with you.
Never has another witnessed my soul
Protecting, ensuring that it remains whole.

Submitted on 2012-01-31 22:03:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This poem was written beautifully. I love the imagery, I love the whole thing actually.
I know this feeling all too well.
Being with the one that you know you're meant to be with is a feeling that cannot be compared.

The poem was simply amazing. I have nothing left to say except
Keep up the fantastic work and I'll keep reading.

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| Posted on 2012-02-02 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
Wow, epic awesomeness. I give you props my friend.

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| Posted on 2012-02-01 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.