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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: annie smith
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 75/61/24
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLovedots
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    Drooping eyes
    and whispered good byes
    makes the way for quickened rest.

    When in love
    none seems to be above
    being with the one, so dear.

    Splendid bliss
    and true happiness
    being in love feels so grand




    Submitted on 2012-01-31 22:49:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yes it does, doesn't it?

    feels grand and makes us feel like a million dollars.

    sweet.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-02-02 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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