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    dots Submission Name: It's Not About Youdots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Every line is about who I don't wanna write about anymore.


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    dotsIt's Not About Youdots
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    This poem once would've been about you.
    The way you laughed and the things you wore,
    the shape of your hands when you're deep in conversation-
    But I don't write about you anymore.

    I suppose that I would have made mention
    of that mole on your right side,
    the fading scars on the inside of your arm,
    the way your body fits perfectly against mine.

    I guess that if I had to continue,
    that I would have spoken of how I missed you so dearly,
    and I thought that you would be mine for a while,
    or how I still hear your voice crystal clearly.

    I would have written about how you kissed me goodbye,
    or how I wept and sunk down against the door,
    that day you got in the car and didn't come back.
    But I don't write about you anymore.





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      Hmmm.. writing about whom you don't want to write about?.. -.- seems like an oxymoron within an oxymoron. Though the idea is interesting.. It's hard to forget.. and little do most understand that in trying to forget; you're in fact remembering. Revolving door..Bool!
    ~Dominique
    | Posted on 2012-02-03 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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