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    dots Submission Name: Catsequencesdots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.45 - 142/113/63
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Yes, it's all so confusing. But face it, that's the idea...isn't it?


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    dotsCatsequencesdots
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    And so it rains...
    the taste of things to come...
    It fills the blades with
    nothing more...nothing more...
    ...this isn't real...
    But yet it's raining,
    Can't you tell?

    You've lost something - but where?
    - but why?

    LOOK!
    ...damn cat...





    Submitted on 2012-02-01 15:00:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      But can you ever actually trust a cat? Did Alice? A cat can best tell you where not to go, where not to lose your head. Cats, however, pretty much go where ever they want and spend a lot of time licking themselves.
    | Posted on 2012-02-19 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      this is the most important thing ever written
    oh what tragedy to see a random kitten
    it leaves one feeling rather disturbed
    with no sign of a meow or purr
    to randomly see a ball of fur
    makes most men berserk
    to see a hellish pussy
    such a CATastrophe
    | Posted on 2012-02-06 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      And so it pours,
    Something more, but
    nothing that I want...
    And
    Realer still,
    filled..
    Brimming, spilling in to
    streets, and into houses..
    I can tell that it's raining..
    There's a tree; small to be sure,
    roots and all,
    floating past my front step...

    I lost something...

    LOOK!
    ...damn dog...

    Damn cats and dogs...
    | Posted on 2012-02-01 00:00:00 | by Narna | [ Reply to This ]


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