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    dots Submission Name: Before You Begindots
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    Author: DiamondTears
    ASL Info:    20/F/Wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 66/109/57
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsBefore You Begindots
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    Let's turn the tides,
    For the grooms and brides,
    Bring back the times, 
    Where vows weren't lies.

    Give us some patience,
    And some reverence,
    For a heart tired and cracking,
    To discover what's sorely lacking.

    If you tear it all apart,
    You will find an empty heart,
    To childish for love to send,
    Without a start, there'll never be a broken end.




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