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    dots Submission Name: Pull the Plugdots

    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Not knowing whether or not to leave someone

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    dotsPull the Plugdots

    This mixture of emotions
    is more than I can take.
    One half of my heart loves you,
    but the other wants to break.

    You're completely clueless
    to what you do.
    You have no idea of
    just what you put me through.

    But some how I'm still in love.
    Sad but true, I'll let this last.
    Again I forgive you and
    put this shit in my past.

    You push me to the limit,
    to the point I nearly crack.
    And as I reach to pull the plug,
    instead I come right back.

    I don't know what draws me in
    after you put me through such hell.
    I can't seem but to let it go
    and simply say, "oh well".

    Submitted on 2012-02-02 10:46:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well I left it vague so the reader could relate more and interpret it how they want so they could use their own experiences to fill in the blanks, so to speak. But at the time I was writing about a boyfriend who kept using drugs and cheating. So now you know! :)
    | Posted on 2013-03-20 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey I need more information what does he do to irritate you so and why are you not dumping him when he does I am so curious now
    | Posted on 2013-03-19 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      Well crafted poem, which shows a developing talent. If this is based on a real situation, I wish you the best. I had to go to a third marriage before I found one that really worked. It takes two to tango.....

    Nice work; good luck!
    | Posted on 2012-02-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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