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    dots Submission Name: Panic Anxiety Fearsdots

    Author: stormyskies
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    dotsPanic Anxiety Fearsdots

    Waking from nightmares,
    since such things
    have happened
    it has been so long.
    Believing in fact
    they were over and gone.
    Now its not so ,
    I wake afraid, confused
    is it real, no, yet still,
    my panic wont diffuse.

    blood curdling screams
    no one can hear.
    Fighting off attackers
    that are not real.
    My mum cannot hear me,
    just as in the past.
    Noone can hear now,
    I keep screaming
    but nothing comes out.

    Sounds in the house
    as I sit alone.
    Frightened to sleep
    in my own home.
    Exhausted my eyes
    refuse to close.
    I have to sleep,
    yet it chills me to the bone.

    Trying to figure
    why the mares?
    Perhaps lack of control
    my life in the air.
    Worried my daughter
    will be alright.
    I cannot sit up,
    exhausted all night.

    I take my phone
    to place down
    beside me.
    More noises sound
    everything is frightening.
    Take a deep breath,
    calm my mind.
    Yet peace is not near
    sleep I cannot find.

    Needing to function
    I pray for release,
    hoping the nightmares,
    for tonight will cease.
    Knowing as I wake
    in the morn,
    the fears will arise
    with the new dawn.

    When can I rest?
    I do not know,
    I am struggling
    always, to overthrow.
    That which hounds me
    day and night.
    Positivity hard,
    panic, anxiety,
    my fearful plight.

    Submitted on 2012-02-02 11:28:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed reading this very much as I can relate wholly. I'm often afflicted with nightmares so lucid and terrifying that I'm too scared to fall back asleep. Some are more like repressed memories and those are even more terrorizing.
    This is a magnificent poem.

    Keep up the awesome work and I'll keep reading.

    | Posted on 2012-02-04 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

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