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    dots Submission Name: smilesdots
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    Author: BevRead
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 20/41/28
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotssmilesdots
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    travelnig faster than i can
    see
    blood
    pressure
    duality
    projection
    perspective
    notice this handle this


    Be aware
    Smile
    Breathe in deeply
    and the remote controll will auto pilot your health to position your brain
    for auto focus
    auto zoom

    these things are certainly under control and we have handled everything perfectly

    good




    Submitted on 2012-02-02 14:44:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A family photo? It reminds me of that. The framed smiles and tricks with the lens to make life appear better than it really is. Something we can look at to try and convince ourselves that everything is as it should be. Interesting write.

    Jane
    | Posted on 2012-02-05 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]


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