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    dots Submission Name: Refreshdots
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    Author: stormyskies
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 1035/868/264
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       http://the-f5-button.tumblr.com/post/3849925388/what-life-actually-needs


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    Of recent times,
    perhaps a month or two.
    I pushed the refresh button
    my life it began anew.

    It was through actions of my own
    yet of another too.
    Finding my one true love,
    my visions all brand new.

    For the first time I see
    perhaps as things have always been.
    Yet to me so many beautiful happenings,
    were to me yet unseen.

    My world now painted brighter colours
    appreciation never had now there,
    to my surroundings and blessings
    I truly became aware.

    In this new born freedom
    my heart and soul can fly.
    To unexpected heights
    for the simplest of reasons why.

    If I was to contemplate again,
    pushing the f5 button, I simply would not,
    given the sum of my experiences
    brought me to this very spot.

    Yet now I wipe the pages,
    starting all over again
    I can now appreciate where ive been,
    my daughter, my love, my friends.

    I guess with that button
    some things it does restore.
    Taking away the clatter
    to uncover all I mentioned afore.




    Submitted on 2012-02-02 16:44:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you Frank it was an old prompt from a contest on allpoetry few more people visit there ...love to see you join ;)
    | Posted on 2012-02-04 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      Wise words indeed......glad you found your re-fresh button......and I am guessing that many more of us will be searching for theirs as well.

    Great write and concept from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2012-02-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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